Story: The Rime on the Spray
Word count: 8169
Summary: The Doctor, Ben and Polly find themselves out on an alien moor on a wintry night with a dangerous mystery to solve.
Characters/ pairings: First Doctor, Ben Jackson, Polly
Ratings: All ages
Author's note: A fic I wrote, in which Part 1 attracted some interest and praise… and part two didn't get read by anybody. Or at least, anybody willing to comment. Which left me wondering, did it just pass everyone by, or did I do something terrible in Part 2 that made them not want to tell me so? It’s possible, because the whole point of the story might not have been what readers were expecting or explained/sold well enough. I’ve decided to post it here. I was fairly pleased by certainly the idea and the set up, so be kind to me if you have to tell me no one commented because it didn’t work, but I think it’s about time I had the nerve to actually ask someone what they thought. *bites fingernails*